It was my mistakes
That caused the
Pain and sorrow
To those who aren't
Immortal
Now I know there
Will be a time for
My solemn hour
And I'll face it
Cause it's the heart
Of everything
I need to open up
My eyes
To save myself from fading
Away now
I can't let go
There's a crowd in
The distance
Screaming out my
Faith
To the hands of
The immortals
At my solemn hour
And I'll face them
Cause it's the heart
Of everything
I need to open
Up my eyes
To save myself
From fading
Away now
I can't let go
I need to open
Up my eyes
3 comments:
Intense.
You're a great writer. Embrace your dark side and let it flow. I like this because you're very intense. Keep up the good work.
wow, Katie. I like this post because I can tell you put a lot of dark feelings into it. It's pretty cool.I hope you can come up with a story soon! It would be fun to read.
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That was a great peice becasue it was intence. you really put detail in it which made it the best.i really like it, i feel like i learned more about you. if you came out with another story like this i would read it.
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